Throughout the grand design of things you get  an A for effort. Exactly where you misplaced me personally was first in your particulars. As it is said, the devil is in the details... And that could not be much more accurate at this point. Having said that, let me tell you precisely what did do the job. Your writing can be extremely persuasive and that is probably why I am making an effort to comment. I do not make it a regular habit of doing that. 2nd, whilst I can easily see a leaps in reasoning you make, I am not really convinced of exactly how you appear to unite your ideas that help to make your conclusion. For now I will, no doubt yield to your issue but wish in the near future you actually link the facts much better.