In the great design of things you'll get  a B+ for effort. Where you misplaced us ended up being on all the details. You know,  it is said, the devil is in the details... And that could not be much more accurate here. Having said that, permit me say to you just what exactly did deliver the results. Your writing is incredibly powerful which is most likely why I am making an effort in order to opine. I do not make it a regular habit of doing that. 2nd, despite the fact that I can certainly notice the leaps in logic you make, I am definitely not certain of just how you seem to connect your ideas that produce the conclusion. For now I will, no doubt yield to your issue but trust in the foreseeable future you link the dots better.